Activity-Important Issues Learnt From Sample Introduction
We were given two sets of Introduction samples to evaluate and find whatever was lacking from both texts.
First up,a project titled "Design and Development of Stair Climbing Trolley". These were what we noticed from the text :
1. Project Overview was not significant to Introduction. Best suited position? Abstract.
2. It didn't follow the inverted pyramid module. Hence,a one-liner of general statement was found. Lack of elaboration meant you're doing a half-@$$39 job :)
3. Main issue was present,but explanation was too lengthy with no supporting evidence. Specific statements quoted from previously executed researches will strengthen one's case.
4. The last paragraph did not do justice to an otherwise interesting project. It should be sentence(s) that gives good impact to the reader,letting them think "so that's why this project must be undertaken".
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